Sorry =_=

8 05 2008

Well…..because i am quite busy lately.

I will say that maybe i won’t post any story until July.

But if you are Indonesian and understand Indonesian, you can see the original format in Indonesian at

http://www.videogamesindonesia.com/forum/showthread.php?t=44293

(But you must become a member first)

Actually, it had 19 chapter already.

But no times to translate it.

If you are understand both Indonesia and English and also kind enough help me translate it, just e-mail me at TheSisterPrincess@gmail.com.

THX ^^





My comment on Stage 0

21 04 2008

Well, actually i translated it from Indonesian.

It is also my first time in writing story in English.

So forgive for any grammar, speeling, or any error in my writing.

I will appreciate to anyone who comment and tell me the error that i made.

When i wrote this in Indonesian, it is also one of my first fanfic.

I am done writing the prologue just in 2 M$ word pages. (avarage pages for each stage is 7-10 pages)

It is the shortest stage in the whole story but also the most important one. ^^

I hope you like my fanfic.





Stage 0: At one glance, you will not forget it

21 04 2008

“C’mon Z! Let’s beat Blackbird together!!!” Akio Asakura, the driver of modified Datsun 240Z and nicknamed ‘Devil Z’ by other street racer because its killing speed. But it make that young man continue to keep driving the ‘Devil Z’. Blackbird, the car which is fated to be archrival of Devil Z. A black colored Porsche 911 which is modified by same man who modify ‘Devil Z’, Jun Kitami. Even now, two of them still race to get title ‘The Fastest on Wangan”.

1 June 1998; Wangan Line

“Hey, what’s your name again? Oh, Wataru! Cheer up! You just arrived here for 2 weeks. I know you miss Indonesia that much!”
Wataru Ko, an Indonesian who is forced move to Tokyo because Jakarta’s riot. He is just sitting on navigator seat of red Honda NSX which is driven by Ryo Arishima.

Ryo say “I heard that you are a car enthusiast like me!. So I want introduce you what is called ‘Hashiriya’ on Wangan.”
“Ha..shi…ri…ya?” Wataru try to spell a new word to him.
“Yes! Hashiriya! It is meaning street racing!” Ryo say.
“Street racing? I understand.” Wataru only answer with simple Japanese.
“Good if you understand me!” Ryo say.

Suddenly, they hear an engine sound. Inline six engine with turbo.
“240Z?” Wataru just keep looking at that first generation Fairlady Z.
“Ah…Devil Z?” Not long after that, they hear the sound of flat six engine with turbo.

Then that car pass them.
“A Porsche 911?” Wataru say.
“Just like usual, Devil Z and Blackbird. They always race to decide who the fastest on wangan is.” Ryo explain to Wataru.

“Why..don’t you…try to…race them?” Wataru ask to Ryo.

Ryo just laugh a little to Wataru’s Japanese which is like innocent boy. But then, Ryo answer “Hahaha, my engine is strong enough to race them.”

Wataru just keep looking, the battle between that two cars from far until they can not be seen.

“It looks like you are vary interested on them?” Ryo ask.

“That car, the 240Z is looked so alive. I can feel that car’s breath. It is my first time, I saw a car like that!.” Wataru say.

“You have a good pair of eyes, Wataru. To be honest, I feel there is a hidden talent inside you.” Ryo say along he drive his NSX on Rainbow Bridge.

“You know? It looks like, I am starting like this country.” Wataru show a little smile on his lips.

“Hahaha, good…good…. I am glad that you seems happy now. Welcome to Japan and Wangan! I will be waiting for your debut on the holy land of the street racer.” Ryo say.

“But…before…then…hmmpp…..” Ryo try hold his laugh.
“What?” Wataru ask.
“Your Japanese….you should learn more about Japanese…..Fine! I will teach you some Japanese!” shout Ryo.
“Haik! I will try my best!” answer Wataru.

“Ok, my boy!” that red NSX now is heading back to Tokyo.

3rd February 2004; “Omega Speed”

“Taru-kun! How is your car?” ask someone who looked quite old and white haired.
“My car is getting faster and better, Oyaji.” Answer Wataru to that old man, which called ‘Oyaji’. He is the owner of a workshop named ‘Omega Speed’.

“Also, it is your payment included your bonuses because you pleased to work at Saturday.” Oyaji say as he give an envelope to Wataru.

“Arigatou, oyaji.” Wataru say.

“Your Japanese is getting better and better.” Oyaji say.

Wataru check his payment and say “Hmmm…oyaji? I think the bonuses is a bit too much.”

“Don’t worry, you worked too good boy. It is a good choice to employ a ‘Todai’ graduate like you. Also, use the bonuses to make your girl happy.” Oyaji say.

“Got it, Oyaji.” Wataru say as he bows to Oyaji for his leave.

“Ok, Z! Tonight, We run on Wangan.” Wataru say to his car.
He ignite his black 350Z which have Nismo S-Tune GT body kit and bronze Volk Racing TE37. Then that car get out from the garage and go right ahead to Wangan.